Froodjakle's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[One California Girl]

Hmm...

Looking at the other reviews on this piece.. You're a whiny little bitch aren't you? Learn to take criticism, or stop trying to be an artist. You won't get ANYWHERE as an artist if you draw stuff like this and tell the people who give you constructive criticism to fuck off. This is not a great picture. It's average AT BEST.

The anatomy is off, her chest looks wonky, her left arm looks like it disappears below the elbow, her feet look completely messed up, you didn't draw your own background and instead used a real life picture, which just looks awkward, especially considering the limited detail of your drawing, her right hand looks like the bone is trying to break it's way through the wrist with how sharp the curve is, her legs are too long (as Mindraker said before you oh-so-rudely rejected his advice)... On the plus side, I really like the way her face and hair looks, and your art style, though simplistic, is pleasing to the eyes.

Ignoring the flaws in the picture itself, I don't understand you. At all. I looked at some of your other art, as well as the reviews, and you seem to be a perfectly reasonable person in every one of them. But when it comes to this picture, you act like a spoiled child that deserves nothing but praise, and everything else you damn well please. Why is that, exactly..?

[GCiP: CE Contest Comic]

NOPE.

Lmao. Even if there were no other entries this one would not win. Know why?
Because YOU CAN'T USE DIALOGUE TO DESCRIBE THE CHARACTERS RELATIONS. It's in the rules. Read them. Plus this is a terrible "character." It's a stickman, not a character. 0/10.

thedespised2166 responds:

Stickmen CAN be characters, y'know. Look at some of the flashes around here...
(For some reason that I don't even know...) I'm still gonna leave this up here.

[Sucks to be Luigi: Link+Daisy]

Funny as always!

Do most of you seriously not understand the joke here? Link says he's gay to get Daisy off his back. He's not really gay, he just wants to get away from her.

Anyway, love these comics man, found them a few weeks ago and I've loved them ever since. Can't wait for you to bring out more of them, your art style and humor is fantastic! 5/5, 10/10, looking forward to the next one.

[Music Maker]

A whimsical dream.

I have to say, I'm impressed. Your art style is something I haven't seen before. It combines the quirky, dark, whirling feeling of some types of art, but at least in this piece, makes it feel more upbeat, giving it a unique blend of the two worlds, which forms together fabulously into an amazing piece. The only possible flaw I would have for this is a few of the fingers bother me, mostly the pointer finger on the right hand, but aside from that, I can't think of any flaws to this. The textures on the piano keys, the way the art swirls, the darkly cartoonish feel overall.. It looks and feels like a dream. A dream that I would love to encounter.

Fantastic work, 10/10. I'll have to keep an eye on your art.

Also, I'd like to note that I find it impressive that you actually seem to try to reply to every review you get. Most people just don't give a damn, and it's refreshing to see somebody who honestly takes an interest in the comments of the public. Kudos to you for being better than the majority.

Comick responds:

Wow what a nice review :) I agree on his fingers haha, they got a little too crooked. I'm really glad you connected to the visuals as well, since its was definitely something I was trying to bring out as dark and cartoonish and still have a little upbeat wonder and energy :D So thanks a lot!